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Anmeldungsdatum: 29.04.2013
Beiträge: 1
Englisches Anschreiben-Hilfe
29.04.2013 20:33
29.04.2013 20:33
Hallo Leute,
ich möchte mich im Ausland für ein Praktikum bewerben. Ich habe jetzt mal ein Schreiben auf Englisch verfasst. In meinem engeren Umfeld gibt es aber keinen, der es mal überprüfen könnte und mein Stand ist leider auch nur Schulenglisch.
Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr Fehler ausbessern würdet, bzw. mir Tipps geben könntest, was zu verbessern ist.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apply for an internship in your company. At the moment I finish my Bachelor in educational science, at *** in *** and I absolve an internship at ****, in the Human Resources area/Change Management. In the following year I am looking forward to start my Master in Human Resources.
To gain insight this area, I want to extend my knowledge in your company. In my current internship, I have learned a lot about the event management and about communication. To complete my skills of human resources, I would like to make an internship in the division of recruiting. I like to communicate with different persons, to organize events and to conduct interviews. In consequence of my academic studies in educantional science, which includes psychology, I acquired a specific background about human behavior, which is very helpful in this career, I think.
To learn something about another culture and to improve my English, I would like to make an foreign country experience in ***. I am impressed by the way of life in this City and the diversity of cultures. Besides I started to learn Arabic.
About myself I can say, that I am a team-minded and aiding person. I am very accurate and I am loyal and faithful.
I would like to absolve the internship for six months, from October 2013, until April 2014.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the advertised position in a personal interview with you in more detail.
Danke schonmal für eure Hilfe!!!!
ich möchte mich im Ausland für ein Praktikum bewerben. Ich habe jetzt mal ein Schreiben auf Englisch verfasst. In meinem engeren Umfeld gibt es aber keinen, der es mal überprüfen könnte und mein Stand ist leider auch nur Schulenglisch.
Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr Fehler ausbessern würdet, bzw. mir Tipps geben könntest, was zu verbessern ist.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apply for an internship in your company. At the moment I finish my Bachelor in educational science, at *** in *** and I absolve an internship at ****, in the Human Resources area/Change Management. In the following year I am looking forward to start my Master in Human Resources.
To gain insight this area, I want to extend my knowledge in your company. In my current internship, I have learned a lot about the event management and about communication. To complete my skills of human resources, I would like to make an internship in the division of recruiting. I like to communicate with different persons, to organize events and to conduct interviews. In consequence of my academic studies in educantional science, which includes psychology, I acquired a specific background about human behavior, which is very helpful in this career, I think.
To learn something about another culture and to improve my English, I would like to make an foreign country experience in ***. I am impressed by the way of life in this City and the diversity of cultures. Besides I started to learn Arabic.
About myself I can say, that I am a team-minded and aiding person. I am very accurate and I am loyal and faithful.
I would like to absolve the internship for six months, from October 2013, until April 2014.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the advertised position in a personal interview with you in more detail.
Danke schonmal für eure Hilfe!!!!