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Anmeldungsdatum: 23.11.2016
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Bewerbungsanschreiben als Volunteer in Englisch
24.11.2016 00:15
24.11.2016 00:15
Hallo,
ich möchte gerne über die Organisation workaway in Taiwan in einer Jugendherberge arbeiten. Ich habe auf der Webseite ein Profil von mir erstellt aus dem nähere Info hervorgeht.
Nun habe ich so meine Schwierigkeiten beim Anschreiben die richtigen Worte zu finden. Auch bin ich mir sicher, dass die Grammatik und Syntax nicht in Ordnung ist.
Kann mir bitte jemand den Text Korrektur lesen bzw. bessere Formulierung?
Ich bedanke mich bereits in voraus.
Gruss
Subject:
I am very interested taking the opportunity to work four weeks in your hostel as a volunteer.
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I will visit Taiwan in January and February 2017. In the following, I would like to explain how I came to this decision.
As I am very interested in foreign cultures, I am sure that working in your country will be a big benefit for me.
I think a trip abroad offers many ways to improve my knowledge and skills as well as personally grow. For me, it is important to meet people and communicate with them. I am curious about new things, helpful and socially adjusted.
Two years ago I did a work placement in Africa. During that time, the team built up a school which was a very rewarding time for me. If you would like to get an impression of the work, feel free to have a look on the youtube video:
[Link nur für registrierte Nutzer sichtbar]
I would be pleased becoming part of your team and spending four weeks in your hostel.
Thank you for viewing my message and I am pleased to hear from you.
Sincerely yours
Zuletzt bearbeitet von hanss68 am 24.11.2016 12:23, insgesamt einmal bearbeitet
ich möchte gerne über die Organisation workaway in Taiwan in einer Jugendherberge arbeiten. Ich habe auf der Webseite ein Profil von mir erstellt aus dem nähere Info hervorgeht.
Nun habe ich so meine Schwierigkeiten beim Anschreiben die richtigen Worte zu finden. Auch bin ich mir sicher, dass die Grammatik und Syntax nicht in Ordnung ist.
Kann mir bitte jemand den Text Korrektur lesen bzw. bessere Formulierung?
Ich bedanke mich bereits in voraus.
Gruss
Subject:
I am very interested taking the opportunity to work four weeks in your hostel as a volunteer.
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I will visit Taiwan in January and February 2017. In the following, I would like to explain how I came to this decision.
As I am very interested in foreign cultures, I am sure that working in your country will be a big benefit for me.
I think a trip abroad offers many ways to improve my knowledge and skills as well as personally grow. For me, it is important to meet people and communicate with them. I am curious about new things, helpful and socially adjusted.
Two years ago I did a work placement in Africa. During that time, the team built up a school which was a very rewarding time for me. If you would like to get an impression of the work, feel free to have a look on the youtube video:
[Link nur für registrierte Nutzer sichtbar]
I would be pleased becoming part of your team and spending four weeks in your hostel.
Thank you for viewing my message and I am pleased to hear from you.
Sincerely yours
Zuletzt bearbeitet von hanss68 am 24.11.2016 12:23, insgesamt einmal bearbeitet