Gast
Motivationsschreiben Tourismusmanagement
08.11.2010 16:32
08.11.2010 16:32
Hey Leute
Ich habe gerade zum ersten mal ein Motivationsschreiben aufgesetzt und bin mir ziemlich unsicher ob das so OK ist. Ich habe mir vorher ein paar beispiele angeguckt und dann einfach ma drauf losgeschrieben und das ist dabei rausgekommen.
Wäre sehr dankbar wenn ihr mal einen Blicki drauf werfen könntet und mir eine kurze Kritik bzw verbesserungsvorschläge gibt.
vielen dank
Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,
Hereby I would like to express my interest in the Bachelor Programm International Tourism Management at NHTV Breda in (for?) fall 2011.
My desire to study (in?) this particular field reflects my huge interest in different countries, their people (residents?), culture, language and their environment.
One of my majors in school was Geography which gave me a great insight into different countries, their culture and history and especially their development according to the tourism industry.
After graduating from school in June 2009 I achieved my dream of becoming an Au Pair in the United States of America, where I am going to be until April 2011.
So far I learned a lot during my stay here. Living with another family that I saw the first time the day when I arrived in Massachusetts and moved to their house was really exciting I adjusted pretty fast to the situation and felt very confident with the new contry and culture.
Working with the kids needs a lot of patience and since I am here my skills of patience improved a lot. The time here made my character really strong and independent. I can handle a lot of difficult situations and always stay optimistic in those.
I need to plan the days with the kids on my own which let me become a very well-organised person who can handle stressful situations really well.
This international experience was also a great opportunity to improve my English skills since I had the chance to take a few English classes at a local College and passed an institutional TOEFL – test. I also took an American Culture and History class which gave me a lot of interesting information about the country.
Additionally staying abroad for such a long time encouraged me to study and live abroad for, if possible, most time of my life.
As it is my future goal to work in the multilateral and always expanding tourism industry I would like to start my international career as a German student in the Netherlands.
The work as a tourism manager has been fascinating me for a couple of years and the internship I did at the M*** Hotel in 2007 strengthened my interest pretty much.
I am also planning to gain some experience in a travel agency once I’m back in Germany to get a wider view of the whole industry.
Ich habe gerade zum ersten mal ein Motivationsschreiben aufgesetzt und bin mir ziemlich unsicher ob das so OK ist. Ich habe mir vorher ein paar beispiele angeguckt und dann einfach ma drauf losgeschrieben und das ist dabei rausgekommen.
Wäre sehr dankbar wenn ihr mal einen Blicki drauf werfen könntet und mir eine kurze Kritik bzw verbesserungsvorschläge gibt.
vielen dank
Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,
Hereby I would like to express my interest in the Bachelor Programm International Tourism Management at NHTV Breda in (for?) fall 2011.
My desire to study (in?) this particular field reflects my huge interest in different countries, their people (residents?), culture, language and their environment.
One of my majors in school was Geography which gave me a great insight into different countries, their culture and history and especially their development according to the tourism industry.
After graduating from school in June 2009 I achieved my dream of becoming an Au Pair in the United States of America, where I am going to be until April 2011.
So far I learned a lot during my stay here. Living with another family that I saw the first time the day when I arrived in Massachusetts and moved to their house was really exciting I adjusted pretty fast to the situation and felt very confident with the new contry and culture.
Working with the kids needs a lot of patience and since I am here my skills of patience improved a lot. The time here made my character really strong and independent. I can handle a lot of difficult situations and always stay optimistic in those.
I need to plan the days with the kids on my own which let me become a very well-organised person who can handle stressful situations really well.
This international experience was also a great opportunity to improve my English skills since I had the chance to take a few English classes at a local College and passed an institutional TOEFL – test. I also took an American Culture and History class which gave me a lot of interesting information about the country.
Additionally staying abroad for such a long time encouraged me to study and live abroad for, if possible, most time of my life.
As it is my future goal to work in the multilateral and always expanding tourism industry I would like to start my international career as a German student in the Netherlands.
The work as a tourism manager has been fascinating me for a couple of years and the internship I did at the M*** Hotel in 2007 strengthened my interest pretty much.
I am also planning to gain some experience in a travel agency once I’m back in Germany to get a wider view of the whole industry.
